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A simple whisper shall fill my head
Erases the fears this day had shed
And brings me down to foreign land
Bare are my feet and guided by a hand
Warmth of the sun and breeze of the moon
Clouds with a thousand twinkling stars at noon
Waves of the sea and canopy of trees
Can do nothing more that makes me please
A sprinkle of spring water would soon do shower
Growth of the earth increases by the hour
And joy of the wind as it dances round the bend
With burning of dear fire in the life it would lend
Thousand new colors soars up in the sky
Loss is the words when we could fly so high
Memory of eternity is now within me
For no one really knows the world I see
Erases the fears this day had shed
And brings me down to foreign land
Bare are my feet and guided by a hand
Warmth of the sun and breeze of the moon
Clouds with a thousand twinkling stars at noon
Waves of the sea and canopy of trees
Can do nothing more that makes me please
A sprinkle of spring water would soon do shower
Growth of the earth increases by the hour
And joy of the wind as it dances round the bend
With burning of dear fire in the life it would lend
Thousand new colors soars up in the sky
Loss is the words when we could fly so high
Memory of eternity is now within me
For no one really knows the world I see
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The first line should have a my not a me. Actually, you should re-read it. Some of the lines don't make sense because you mix up my and me or use improper verbs. As i read the comments, i realized that this was on purpose but honestly I feel like it detracts from your poem. I spend more time focusing on that than I can on the actual piece because when I read it aloud my head just screams "what?!"